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Alone, she sits in her tower, no longer the scared little girl she was, now a bitter woman. Her mother had told her a prince would save her, where was he? She cuts her hair and pieces of her past that she wants no one to see. She won’t wait any longer to be saved, she’ll rescue herself. Once her heart ached as she paced in her tiny world, no more, no more, she decided as she felt the short ends of her hair. Upon a rope made of torn bed sheets and curtains, she descends from her tower, no longer prisoner of her own accord.

The sun bathes her and her skin feels too tight. She’s too far from the home she’d known all these years, too far to feel the restriction of expectations. She touches the center of her chest, what’s this? It feels so foreign and new. It bubbles up and she feels muscles in her face relax, she’s smiling. After so long!

She looks about her, so many paths, so many chances, so many possibilities.

She stops, laughter threatening to spill from her, she’s afraid to let it out. What if it won’t come back? She takes a deep breath and lets it soar free; a heavy weight has been lifted from her chest.

She is her laughter.

She is, after long last, free.
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One of my friends got me started on this when she sent me an amazing version of Little Red Riding Hood she wrote herself. This is a re-write of a story I wrote in the sixth grade and after finding it(and deciphering my own handwriting) I decided to brush it off and re-write it for the afore mentioned friend.
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~StoryOfAGirlGoneBi Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this really speaks to me ... i don't know if that is a good or bad thing though xD
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!ZahilaraBennett Jan 12, 2013  Student Writer
Brilliant.
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:iconshybookworm:
Thank you so much! ^u^
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!ZahilaraBennett Jan 12, 2013  Student Writer
No problem.
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~sweetmanillagirl Jan 12, 2013  Student Writer
really cool
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:iconshybookworm:
Thank you! It really means a lot! ^u^
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~sweetmanillagirl Jan 12, 2013  Student Writer
welcome, are you going to continue with it?
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:iconshybookworm:
Perhaps, I really can't say, I just go with the flow on these things. ^-^
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~sweetmanillagirl Jan 12, 2013  Student Writer
i get that
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